Fireworks
This is our recount about fireworks
I think fireworks shoud not be banned because they are colourful for little kids too look at.
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I think fireworks are awsome because they are like bombs in the sky but It doesn't Have a timer that Countdown going down because they shoot up Randomly. Like a a bullet going into the sky.
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When i holded the stick fireworks it shooted so fast like flash but it went inside the sky.
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6 misitles went inside the sky they were 6 packets of firework sticks at our house me and my sister were so suprised to see 6 packets of stick fireworks we lighted 5 at a time then it finished so we went back in side to go to sleep.
Hi there Arsalaan, what a great first paragraph you have written, You certainly have made it interesting for us to read. Do you think you could make paragraph 2 as exciting?
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